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[[T] Flip]

I like how the bass...

Puts it's penis deep inside my ears and gives me a nice massage....
Ahhhhhh....
If you could make this song longer, you would make my ears only happier :)

Therm0 responds:

Why thank you. I don't really know how to extend it--but I'll try. I'm afraid I can't guarantee it, though. I will try. :)

[Stoned And Naked With Wolves]

Haha

Buddy, for SOME reason it reminded me of Castle Cat.
And when a melody does that it's got to have a fucking high score.

I liiiike it. It's kind of ambient, and could really use random rap lines thrown in here and there like "Stoned and naked with the wolves, stoned and naked oooutdoors" but since it's a loop, that could be annoying.

Great composition.

himynameisprints responds:

haha, thanks man :)

maybe a rap mix is in order ;)

[X Killer]

It's very weird indeed...

It's a nice song, I really like the weirdness, it's kinda, trippy, but I wouldn't really have it in dubstep, when it's dubstep I'm really waiting for the power in the SWOSHSWOSHSWOSH with really clear climaxes, you don't really have those climaxes though...

BUT, I like your style.

Shimo responds:

I'm in love with the dubstep genre. Can't seem to stop listening. However my skills within creating music myself is very very limited, hence it's only a hobby. The day I succeed in making a real dubstep track I might actually, and quite literally, explode :O

Thank you very much.

[The struggle between balance]

The song was a little too empty...

It had no climax.

You have a nice idea, and you have good sounds.
But dynamically, there's no buildup, no real climax, I mean I do notice SOMETHING that could resemble a climax, but bro, you NEED another instrument which plays the mood.

That instrument has to be dynamic, first soft, then angry, then dosing down, and then just exploding to finally fully come to calm...

JamesDM19 responds:

Thanks for the advice :)
I can see what you mean and I have taken on board your critique , il keep this in mind for my next peice . I understood what you meant about climax! im seing it now the more I play it , finding a way to bring my work together seems to be something im struggling with perhaps its becouse im still learning .
Thanks though youve been a great help :)

[Thirnu's Clu]

I can see...

A million bunnies doing the happy dance on this one :D
Oh cheered me up.

You know, I don't know why, but it would be cool if you would cut in a break somewhere there with thunder, just a long thunder sound and nothing and then... BOOM the song again :D That would definitely be a powerful climax.

[Arms Around Me]

Your idea is sweet but...

Only drums? You've gotta do more than that.
At least sing, but if you added another instrument that would be ideal.

This is too empty to be called a song.

demonunitband responds:

Well the only other thing i could even try to play is bass but my amp is brok so i cant and i dont have any editing equipment. =( Ty for a scoree tho

[Krislyn]

Niceeee...

It's a solid song. But needs just some other instrument, to answer the piano.
Then it'll be great :)

furwave responds:

Thank you! I understand your idea and see how it could appeal to others! I'm thinking the same thing, but the linear-ness of how it is now appeals to me a lot. Maybe I'll continue working on it as a new project, though.. Maybe in a whole different style, and perhaps even try to fade this into the more energetic track which might (emphasis on 'might') come in the future. :D

[==(Let's Get Meditational]

Woah sexy...

This is like fucking ambient man...

Ohhhh my ears... they are calming down...
OMFG this reminds me of Machine Love man.

Oh SHIT this is perfect!

Don't change a thing, it's really great :D
All instruments are perfectly in harmony :)

[Emanhattan]

The Bass!

It's going into red.

Tone down on the bass, it's fucking up the earphones.
And I mean the BOOM BOOM bass, it has a little too much boom if you know what I'm sayin'.

Add a little more variation in the second part.

RESPECT responds:

thanks homie, i'll def change up the bass soon,

peace

[endless pleasure loop YES!]

Heh...

Nice loop so far, you might wanna continue with a short silence with just the bass for a second and then BOOM it! :D
Nice already, I'm seeing forward to this becoming a song :)