Falonefal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Five-Ton Elephant Swing]

Angelus sucks.

This song is ingenious, I don't know what the fuck that dude is blabbering about, the trombone (the main melody?) is INGENIOUS, I could see this in an animation about an elephant having drunk out of the polluted river and then walking around drunk through town destroying everything, with a text in the end "Keep our waters clean, it makes elephants drunk"

Ah well, maybe I'll make it one day with your permission of course, I'm having lots of flashes in my mind which I'm going to make someday :P
I'm already listening to it for the 50th time on loop, ingenious.

Don't change anything, maybe you could add a washboard instrument sound in some places, but it's perfect already :)

samulis responds:

Thanks for the kind reply, although I do have to agree with Angelus on two things- we were desperately out of tune and had not played for over two months. :)

Feel free to use the song, or any of my songs, whenever you want as long as they are non-commercial, you attribute me, and you tell me. ;)

And best of luck if you ever get to that flash. :)

[Highly Superstitious]

HOLY SHIT

THIS IS THE BEST THING I HAVE NOT HEARD IN MONTHS!!!!!!!!!!!

5/5 AND 10/10 FROM ME EVERY DAY BUDSZZ

FlameRetardant responds:

;) Have a good one.

[Tits Incorporated]

APPROVE!

EVORPPA!

[i found a kitten]

Niiiiice :)

Gets my spirits up, the song is perfect, musically, harmonically, you pulled off a perfect song right there.
So very well done.

[Blu's ballad!]

Woah.

Only sad that the drums kind of distract me from the melody because they are so freaking loud, they really got to be toned down.
Plus, those drums kind of don't fit the song, the bass drum does, but the hi-hat and the snare don't, they sound kind of too empty.

So it's ONLY an issue with the drums that I have, but for the rest, the song is REALLY great! That guitar, that is just fucked up man! In the right way! Maybe you could add a little echo to that guitar, to the long notes... I think that could be interesting :) VERY nice composition.

My 10 cents.

Theeinferno responds:

Glad you liked it.

[Spade]

Awww

Nice little simple song... your rain is sure softer than my rain.

This song sounds as if a Turtle just said "fuck it" and started dancing them paws off.

If you could add some "wind-like" effect to the background, like "swwwwwwooooooooooooooooosh" that would waltz through the song, it would be really cool.

Very nice work.

My 10 cents.

TerrorMantis responds:

Why thanks for the input. I've decided that I'm going to continue working on this track and add a lot more onto it. I'll be sure to try out your advice and see how it sounds.

[Dirty Stuff]

Hmm...

at 0:50 I was kind of expecting an explosion, a climax, but that never came.

Although I like your style, when that stuff kicked in at 1:33, kinda cool.
But still the song is a little empty, not enough dynamics.
On 2:00 you got it! That's when the song really got some dynamics, but that has to be done earlier in some way.

But nice stuff anyway :)

My 10 cents.

alvys18 responds:

hey thanks for the review dude very helpful...I made another version and fixed a couple of things.

[[Dis] - Grunty Remix]

That saw in the beginning...

It's a little too loud, make it a little less loud so it won't overpower the intro so hard.
And overall in the song it sometimes overpowers the song, a little less loud, would surely improve this song.

But musically, it's really well. Good Job.

My 10 cents.

[Game over ~]

It's far from bad.

But I think the piano shouldn't sound so empty, give the piano a little more bass perhaps, because right now the music box and piano are both so sharp, and that's kind of annoying, the piano should be counterweighting the music box.

Furthermore, maybe you could change the melody once somewhere that comes from the music box, and then fall back to the first one, it would give the song a little more dynamics.

My 10 cents.

[OneWingedAngel BlackSkiesRemix]

A little noise...

Is going through the song, because some of the sounds are going into the red I presume.

Right now it's pretty good, but if you can get rid of that noise that is throughout almost the whole song, it will be very good.

My 10 cents.

AMTRAX91 responds:

I reuploaded the music file and fixed the noise and rhythm problems