HAhaha
It was a little too repetitive and empty, and although I like the alternative sound you have, the sounds were a little bit too cheesy, you should find better sounds, and CERTAINLY better drums, those drums were bad, plus this song would be so much better if actually played at real instruments, some reverb could do awesome work in certain parts. Oh well.
But it made me laugh, because 't were a little bit too cheesy sounds :P
First off, I can only play the drums and somewhat piano. Second, I don't have a microphone to record my music, nor a place where I can do it in peace. But hey, it's a start. I'm just practicing with different techniques as of now, but once I can get the things I need. Then I could make some decent songs, until then, this is all I can stir up. By the way, I like your work, from what I listened to anyways. Thanks for the advice.
A loop's gotta have dynamics too...
I was way too empty, and that sound was a little bit hurtful to the ears if you listen to it in earphones, plus it's very monotone, which means it's really not nice for looping.
Fix the sound, make it somewhat longer, and make it more dynamic adding some extra instruments/sounds whatever, your sandbox.
It's nice but...
The mix is not done right, I can HEAR it going in the red, it wasn't a very clean mix as I can hear, but it's a really nice composition!
Get your mixing better, and this song will be much much better, sometimes it just obliterates the speakers.
Good work though.
Yeah it could be way better, we will most likely redo it in the future when we have better availabilities to us. but thanks for checking it out and the feedback!
Jiouch...
Ouch, I am listening in my earphones on, and it kinda hurts my ears to listen to it, as if I am being choked, it's a nice effect to have on some parts to surprise the listener, but right now it seriously severes the enjoyability of the song.
It was also a little too empty, some minimal drums would be nice.
But the most important thin is to fix that sound a little, try to find something else that doesn't hurt our poor ears in earphones :)
Nice kickoff...
And indeed has a nice catchy tune to it.
You could ass more sounds and short things to "decorate" your song more in certain places, because right now it's a little repetitive.
And a little too empty in some parts.
But certainly a good track, I liked the ending, 't was like some very ingenious motherfucker sends out his mothafucking drones to kill the fucking hero.
Thanks alot for your review. I appreciate feedback very much. I'll definitely think more about decorations in my next song. Trying to think what that means, I'm assuming maybe some sound effects and perhaps even another tune or maybe a different sample with the same score? Just some ideas....
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't was fun to listen to, and it fits that animation perfectly.
Certainly Funky.
It's really dynamic, and really sound, I can chill to this, however the guitar solo was a little raw, but I kinda like it, it made me wake up from the chill for a moment there, I like it.
And what do you play on the street corner?
Good but short.
Okay it's a loop so it's not that bad, but it doesn't loop very well, it kinda blows you in the face when it loops, change something about that, but it's nice work anyway :)
Yes, definitely good.
It's really dynamic, well mixed, and you change how the melody goes pretty often, I really really like that.
Good job, don't change anything...
Well, you could do something interesting with the drums during the moments when the orchestral synth starts to play...
But it's good without that too.
Thanks for your feedback and the generous score, really appreciate it, yeah sometimes I forget about the drums and focus too much on the music. I will bear that in mind in the future. Thanks for pointing it out, helps a lot.
Feel the muse
And let it sing the song out to you.
It's not so good yet. too empty.
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