Falonefal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[We Gotta Fix the Polytics]

Great!

Can't wait to hear the full song.

Keep it up, FlameRetardant :P lol.

FlameRetardant responds:

You keep it up too ;)

[RMP - Tired Of It]

Certainly nice.

Great mixing, really well done musically, only the voice is a little bit too sharp for me, it needs to be less sharp, singing with a little more bass would be a little better, however, if this is your style, just keep it, it's good this way.

Dynamic, nice lyrics too.

Great job :)

[Mad Mad Men]

Wow great :)

The part from :39 is a little bit too simple, you need to put in something that goes rather fast to contrast the slow notes that are there now, maybe you could use the same soft sound that comes in the "break" after it, this way those other instruments would fall off, and that one would stay, giving a nice effect.

But it's really awesome :D

McFarlandBEATS responds:

Thanks much!

Your suggestion really makes a LOT of sense. That would really be a nice touch to it. I'll do just that! I wonder if you can update songs on NG? I can't find an edit button anywhere...

[RMP - The Look Of It]

Die Antwoord

Lol you remind me of that band.
It's alternative, fun shit right here :)
Maybe you could add the lyrics to the description :P

[As if I'd have to tell you]

It's nice...

Yes certainly a friendly song.
But you either need better recording equipment, or you should use adobe audition or any other tool to remove the noise, the noise really ruined the experience, really.

But the song made up for it.

You know what...add a rain sample to, I mean it, to the background, very silently, it'll be nice :)

[Dub Fidget Warm Up]

Musically Boring In the beginning.

Yes well, the sounds were in harmony, but the song was really boring, it needs something on the background, some "chording" now it's really empty very often, and makes that makes it boring to listen to, although I'm digging the heavy sound somewhere in the middle.

There's room for improvement in the beginning of the song, I liked the soft sounds against the short sharp sounds in the second part.

The second part of the song is much better.

[newbeatFaLa]

Couple of points.

Yea it's nice, and all sounds are in harmony, but it gets repetitive, try to variate more, add more riffs, and dynamically improve your song.

This doesn't sound finished yet, but in the right direction.

[The Forgotten [RGF]]

I could write you a review.

Or I could just say "fuck yea" and you'll understand what I mean.

"In the outlying lands of my emotions
Reigns an unknown enemy
An enemy merciful and yet with a good cause
Am I the enemy? Am I the bad guy
Am I the one making the bad decisions
Must I turn to see the truth from another perspective?
It's up to me to decide, so there I go,
I'll write a book, and may my crusades be remembered
Do you remember my crusades paladin?
DO YOU? Do you remember anything we done?
The past crumbled away, like paper burned,
What have we done? Did we light the fire?
Tread! TREAD, stop the fire!
Our sould do not deserve to burn yet
Where do we burn?! SAVE US GOD, SAVE US!

Prayers be hears, prayers fulfilled, makes a man's wish come true.
How generous is God when honestly overfills jealousy.
Some say we are but liars to our own kind.
I say we're artists, just very unsuccessful ones,
But we keep trying, we will...
Don't worry, I'll write a sonnet for you too,
And my words will scar and please your ego."

Well, I could write something to it right out of my mind, so that's why I'm giving you an 11/10, only NG doesn't show it.

[K17 - Cool loop]

Yiouch.

It a cool loop yeah, although could use a little more variation, and be a little longer, also, the beginning of the loop really scars the ears, waaaaay too hard.

You can do better :)

["X" - WIP]

Nice start

This is really nice.
Do continue working on it, let the waves return sometimes in the song, like every 8th beat with fade out, or randomly, but let them return sometimes, it makes it more fun, and you could make a kick off using orchestrals, something really grabbing.

Nice nice nice start.

jtza8 responds:

Thank you very much for your kind review. I'm still a total newbie, but I suppose I need to get a better tool than Garageband if I'd do something orchestral. :)

Need to meet some more people (I think I know where I can find them) and get the right gear. Just need a sort of "jump-start". Whatever, I'll see what happens to this piece...