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Real Instruments = Win

It was Dynamic, Real Instruments (although I wasn't certain about the drums) it had variation, although I think you repeat your riffs one in one a little too often try to variate, try to continue the riff instead of repeating, as if you were soloing, it was boring to listen to after a while, I really liked the heavy metal surprise, but the build up to it could bore a person and would make it so he wouldn't even get to the hard core part, the soloing guitar in the hardcore part could have some reverb on it, a wee bit.

Good stuff right there.

Oh and if you'd have some bass, would be nice too :)

jeppeman responds:

Thanks for the good critism im glad you're helping me to improve.

The drums are ezdrummer tracks so that's why it sounds strange.

P.S I had a bass but since i had to pithc shift my guitar it turned out wierd.

[Our favourite expressions]

LOL

It was fun to listen to, it's pretty original, but lacked variation.

So the 8/10.

[Hit Da F-F-Floor]

Good yea.

There's nothing more to say than that it's a good composition.
I don't give 10/10 because it doesn't have anything that really catches my attention, surprise me, so it lacks a little bit of originality, but musically it's very well done, unarguably.

;)

[Bunny Rabbit-Lord1Mauler]

Nice :)

It's nice how it was mixed, and the melody was nice too, it was as if it were an animation and the characters are running around on the set fixin' final affairs and the director is watching as they resolve their problems :)

Lord1Mauler responds:

That's an interesting way of looking at it, thanks. I enjoy making it more of a chaos and then putting on the featured song (or a feature song of my choice).

[Octorok sodomy]

Aliens don't know how to dance...

That's right, they're like high on their alien drugs, but still don't know how to dance.

Add some bass man, needs more bass :)

[Acid Journey]

Drums...

The song is overall okay, only the drums SERIOUSLY lack, you need to work on those, plus, work a little on your riffing, try to variate in riffing even when you repeat the same riff, like make the last note go up instead down sometimes etc.

Also, that long quick bass was really really disturbing, really made me nervous since you expect a breakdown after such a long double bass.
Please change it to something different.

Tannertherocker responds:

I figured i messed something up. But i don't have alot to work with, i have Fl Studio 9 demo. That is because it's like 30 bucks for the smallest pack. Im 14. Jobless. haha. But I thank you for the feedback

[SmellsLike TeenSpiritCover]

Mixing.

And Quality, two great friends you must make.
Plus you GOTTA have better recording tools, this was a pain to ears, also I can hear that the instruments are in fact not real instruments right?

Are they all not real instruments? I really suggest doing the whole song with real instruments and good recording equipment.

Plus, yea the singing, you could replace it with a guitar, but now it felt as if something serious was missing.

My 10 cents.

BlueWaffelband responds:

Hey.... kinda thankz for the review in a way. all the instruments are real but they are shit. we were at our bassists house who lives in vegas. so we couldnt bring our good quality stuff. the only thing that sounded good was his bass =P

[Golden Sun Demo]

Well.

I can certainly hear that time has been put into it, so that's nice, however, I think lacked some bassing, but then again, it's not done yet.

Get the full version done :)

zzbtbest1000zz responds:

I will get it done. Thanks for the 8, I appreciate it ^_^

[Gwop.]

Nice sounds.

Nice composition, it's composed well, but a certain 'boom' lacks in it, and I mean that there's no "catch".
Sometimes you copy-paste for too long, try to variate even in your repeating riffs when possible.

I liked the usage of voice.

Leprasean responds:

Thanks, I basically tried to make a song thats incredibly simple and easy to drift away with. Nice icon bee tee dubs.

[Pieceofmind (for those behind)]

Spheres

Curves and halves
All made from stone
From stone-cold air
Right and chilling to the bone

Stay in sight or stay outside
You need to be there in this world
You'll make it far if you go on
That's the reason you were born.

- Nice composition, it inspired me to write a poem, when a composition makes me write something it's good :) It makes me think of driving in a car on the interstate at night. :)