Falonefal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yucky Face]

Happy Face

This sure gets my spirits up :)
It's kind of like Monty Python!

A Job well done.

[{[Celestial City]}]

As I tell most...

It's good musically, but misses some certain 'zing' that can't be improvised.
Something that'll make me remember this song in particular, but it's a good song nevertheless, no flaws except the length, it's a little short make it longer and add a break and then it'll be a greater composition yet.

[[Impulse]]

Satisfying.

Good harmony, nice feel to it.
Yeah it's decent, it misses some sort of 'zing' that would make me remember this song particularly, and that's just something that really comes like that *snaps fingers*
You can only change that if it a melody suddenly waltzes into your mind and keeps sitting there until you put into a song, but this was a really decent, my 8/10 belong to you, and 5/5 because there probably will be zero bombers, and this song doesn't deserve that at all.

[[VN] Eclipse]

It's a really attacking song.

And that's nice, I feel as if someone is having a debate with me, and is more powerful in his arguments, my arguments are completely shadowed by his strength, and I can do nothing, I am helpless.

Nice nice nice nice...
Don't change anything, it's very well this way :)

VNStudios responds:

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[Everlasting Light]

Nice..

It's really nice and I can see you put work into it, but it really needs another instrument that will add some zing to the melody, something that will be "in conversation" with the song, which makes the song a little more interesting to listen to :)

[{[Wind of Time]} ¤demo¤]

Fear.

I've listened to your demo's, and they're not bad at all.
You just need to gather your shit, and fucking FINISH some!
It will give you such a fucking satisfied feeling, don't be scared, just fucking do it!

Making music is also work, just push yourself into finishing one of those demo's you like best, just finish one, doesn't matter if in the end it doesn't sound optimal, that's GREAT, because if you don't like something, you usually have an idea of how to improve it - do so!

My 10 cents :)

[Luminescence]

Hmm...

There isn't enough change in the melody, it's really repetitive, head out on a limb and change it somewhere a little, instead of going down, go UP, instead of slow, go really fast, and then EXPLODE IN A VIOLENT melody of happiness :)

scrappy777 responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, I sometimes tend to have trouble veering from repetitive beats. I appreciate your suggestions and will definitely keep them in mind for my future songs :)

Scrappy777

[Cricket City Level]

Well I immediately...

know a good melody when I hear it.
It's good, a good start, now you need to add a violin ensemble on the background, which will make your melody RISE, give it an atmosphere...
But this is starting out RATHER well I should say.

It's not done yet, so I can't really give you a high score yet, but when it's done, I'll definitely look into it again, it has potential :)

nsb411 responds:

Thanks. I see what you mean and I'll get working on it tomorrow.

[Go Eat Horse Shit]

It's mixing...

Lacks seriously, you should've done a MUCH better job, and it's you who must mix it well, and not us who should put their speakers' volume down.
It sounds as if you recorded it with a laptop microphone...
So either use a mixing program to try and make it sound better, or buy a better mic.

One way or the other, it needs improvement, the melody is not bad, doesn't really need any improvement.

FUNKM0NKEY responds:

I Record Using a Rockband Microphone and to be honest its actually not bad. also why a 5? you said u liked it you should of given it like a 6 or something ha

[Get Down and Outta Sight]

Well...

It's really good, but I would say this is a melody for a race, because when you are spotted, it has to be a really disturbing melody, ever played Oblivion IV? When you're spotted there it's like OH SHIT! This is just giving me the feeling to race, or a deathmatch kind of melody, but not really an "Oh shit I'm spotted" melody.

But great anyways :)

xperimental02 responds:

Yeah, after giving it a buncha listens, it did sound a bit separate from a stealth theme. Might lump it in with the other stuff for Caliber: A Trip Into Shooting Game Cliche Land.

Didn't think of a race theme yet, though, I never thought of it that way.