Nice start
This is really nice.
Do continue working on it, let the waves return sometimes in the song, like every 8th beat with fade out, or randomly, but let them return sometimes, it makes it more fun, and you could make a kick off using orchestrals, something really grabbing.
Nice nice nice start.
Thank you very much for your kind review. I'm still a total newbie, but I suppose I need to get a better tool than Garageband if I'd do something orchestral. :)
Need to meet some more people (I think I know where I can find them) and get the right gear. Just need a sort of "jump-start". Whatever, I'll see what happens to this piece...
Real Instruments = Win
It was Dynamic, Real Instruments (although I wasn't certain about the drums) it had variation, although I think you repeat your riffs one in one a little too often try to variate, try to continue the riff instead of repeating, as if you were soloing, it was boring to listen to after a while, I really liked the heavy metal surprise, but the build up to it could bore a person and would make it so he wouldn't even get to the hard core part, the soloing guitar in the hardcore part could have some reverb on it, a wee bit.
Good stuff right there.
Oh and if you'd have some bass, would be nice too :)
Thanks for the good critism im glad you're helping me to improve.
The drums are ezdrummer tracks so that's why it sounds strange.
P.S I had a bass but since i had to pithc shift my guitar it turned out wierd.
Nice :)
It's nice how it was mixed, and the melody was nice too, it was as if it were an animation and the characters are running around on the set fixin' final affairs and the director is watching as they resolve their problems :)
That's an interesting way of looking at it, thanks. I enjoy making it more of a chaos and then putting on the featured song (or a feature song of my choice).
Drums...
The song is overall okay, only the drums SERIOUSLY lack, you need to work on those, plus, work a little on your riffing, try to variate in riffing even when you repeat the same riff, like make the last note go up instead down sometimes etc.
Also, that long quick bass was really really disturbing, really made me nervous since you expect a breakdown after such a long double bass.
Please change it to something different.
I figured i messed something up. But i don't have alot to work with, i have Fl Studio 9 demo. That is because it's like 30 bucks for the smallest pack. Im 14. Jobless. haha. But I thank you for the feedback
Mixing.
And Quality, two great friends you must make.
Plus you GOTTA have better recording tools, this was a pain to ears, also I can hear that the instruments are in fact not real instruments right?
Are they all not real instruments? I really suggest doing the whole song with real instruments and good recording equipment.
Plus, yea the singing, you could replace it with a guitar, but now it felt as if something serious was missing.
My 10 cents.
Hey.... kinda thankz for the review in a way. all the instruments are real but they are shit. we were at our bassists house who lives in vegas. so we couldnt bring our good quality stuff. the only thing that sounded good was his bass =P
Well.
I can certainly hear that time has been put into it, so that's nice, however, I think lacked some bassing, but then again, it's not done yet.
Get the full version done :)
I will get it done. Thanks for the 8, I appreciate it ^_^
Nice sounds.
Nice composition, it's composed well, but a certain 'boom' lacks in it, and I mean that there's no "catch".
Sometimes you copy-paste for too long, try to variate even in your repeating riffs when possible.
I liked the usage of voice.
Thanks, I basically tried to make a song thats incredibly simple and easy to drift away with. Nice icon bee tee dubs.
HAhaha
It was a little too repetitive and empty, and although I like the alternative sound you have, the sounds were a little bit too cheesy, you should find better sounds, and CERTAINLY better drums, those drums were bad, plus this song would be so much better if actually played at real instruments, some reverb could do awesome work in certain parts. Oh well.
But it made me laugh, because 't were a little bit too cheesy sounds :P
First off, I can only play the drums and somewhat piano. Second, I don't have a microphone to record my music, nor a place where I can do it in peace. But hey, it's a start. I'm just practicing with different techniques as of now, but once I can get the things I need. Then I could make some decent songs, until then, this is all I can stir up. By the way, I like your work, from what I listened to anyways. Thanks for the advice.
It's nice but...
The mix is not done right, I can HEAR it going in the red, it wasn't a very clean mix as I can hear, but it's a really nice composition!
Get your mixing better, and this song will be much much better, sometimes it just obliterates the speakers.
Good work though.
Yeah it could be way better, we will most likely redo it in the future when we have better availabilities to us. but thanks for checking it out and the feedback!
Nice kickoff...
And indeed has a nice catchy tune to it.
You could ass more sounds and short things to "decorate" your song more in certain places, because right now it's a little repetitive.
And a little too empty in some parts.
But certainly a good track, I liked the ending, 't was like some very ingenious motherfucker sends out his mothafucking drones to kill the fucking hero.
Thanks alot for your review. I appreciate feedback very much. I'll definitely think more about decorations in my next song. Trying to think what that means, I'm assuming maybe some sound effects and perhaps even another tune or maybe a different sample with the same score? Just some ideas....
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