Secret Mission 7 Zero.
I'm sorry, but spamming the BBS with your personal vendettas isn't the best way to keep your cool going.
I will give you criticism:
Points for Improvement:
1. Give style to written out things, don't use usual lettertypes.
2. Work on your drawings of everything, it was really sloppy, just put more work into it, like three times as much work.
3. Replay button at end.
4. Better storyline; it just came out of the blue.
5. Make it longer, with more moments of tension.
That's all.