It's mixing...
Lacks seriously, you should've done a MUCH better job, and it's you who must mix it well, and not us who should put their speakers' volume down.
It sounds as if you recorded it with a laptop microphone...
So either use a mixing program to try and make it sound better, or buy a better mic.
One way or the other, it needs improvement, the melody is not bad, doesn't really need any improvement.
I Record Using a Rockband Microphone and to be honest its actually not bad. also why a 5? you said u liked it you should of given it like a 6 or something ha
Well...
It's really good, but I would say this is a melody for a race, because when you are spotted, it has to be a really disturbing melody, ever played Oblivion IV? When you're spotted there it's like OH SHIT! This is just giving me the feeling to race, or a deathmatch kind of melody, but not really an "Oh shit I'm spotted" melody.
But great anyways :)
Yeah, after giving it a buncha listens, it did sound a bit separate from a stealth theme. Might lump it in with the other stuff for Caliber: A Trip Into Shooting Game Cliche Land.
Didn't think of a race theme yet, though, I never thought of it that way.
I like how the bass...
Puts it's penis deep inside my ears and gives me a nice massage....
Ahhhhhh....
If you could make this song longer, you would make my ears only happier :)
Why thank you. I don't really know how to extend it--but I'll try. I'm afraid I can't guarantee it, though. I will try. :)
Haha
Buddy, for SOME reason it reminded me of Castle Cat.
And when a melody does that it's got to have a fucking high score.
I liiiike it. It's kind of ambient, and could really use random rap lines thrown in here and there like "Stoned and naked with the wolves, stoned and naked oooutdoors" but since it's a loop, that could be annoying.
Great composition.
It's very weird indeed...
It's a nice song, I really like the weirdness, it's kinda, trippy, but I wouldn't really have it in dubstep, when it's dubstep I'm really waiting for the power in the SWOSHSWOSHSWOSH with really clear climaxes, you don't really have those climaxes though...
BUT, I like your style.
I'm in love with the dubstep genre. Can't seem to stop listening. However my skills within creating music myself is very very limited, hence it's only a hobby. The day I succeed in making a real dubstep track I might actually, and quite literally, explode :O
Thank you very much.
The song was a little too empty...
It had no climax.
You have a nice idea, and you have good sounds.
But dynamically, there's no buildup, no real climax, I mean I do notice SOMETHING that could resemble a climax, but bro, you NEED another instrument which plays the mood.
That instrument has to be dynamic, first soft, then angry, then dosing down, and then just exploding to finally fully come to calm...
Thanks for the advice :)
I can see what you mean and I have taken on board your critique , il keep this in mind for my next peice . I understood what you meant about climax! im seing it now the more I play it , finding a way to bring my work together seems to be something im struggling with perhaps its becouse im still learning .
Thanks though youve been a great help :)
Your idea is sweet but...
Only drums? You've gotta do more than that.
At least sing, but if you added another instrument that would be ideal.
This is too empty to be called a song.
Well the only other thing i could even try to play is bass but my amp is brok so i cant and i dont have any editing equipment. =( Ty for a scoree tho
Niceeee...
It's a solid song. But needs just some other instrument, to answer the piano.
Then it'll be great :)
Thank you! I understand your idea and see how it could appeal to others! I'm thinking the same thing, but the linear-ness of how it is now appeals to me a lot. Maybe I'll continue working on it as a new project, though.. Maybe in a whole different style, and perhaps even try to fade this into the more energetic track which might (emphasis on 'might') come in the future. :D
The Bass!
It's going into red.
Tone down on the bass, it's fucking up the earphones.
And I mean the BOOM BOOM bass, it has a little too much boom if you know what I'm sayin'.
Add a little more variation in the second part.
Too short and...
Not enough variation in that little amount of time... you might want to make it longer and add a highpitched melody to it.
Well this is not actually suppose to be a loop, Its just something I made and wanted to see what people thought of it so I can make a song out of it. :D
Thanks for the comment though!
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